English Language Lessons

English Language Lessons
*Politically Incorrect Opinion Texts: https://drjamesmanos.blogspot.com/2022/03/politically-incorrect-opinion-texts-of.html *Τexts with Ηealth-related Τopics: https://mymedicaltexts.blogspot.com *Herbs & Supplements: https://herbsanddietarysupplementsdatabase.blogspot.com *Source for the image (free to use): Hypothetical flag quartering the British and American flags (January 11, 2009). Author: Lunar Dragoon. Source: Wikipedia Link: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:UK-US_flag.png

Friday, July 5, 2019

TIPS for English (7): Essay (b)

Useful linking words and phrases

 

(Regarding pronunciation, I underline and have bold the letter that needs to be stressed)

 

Relevantly

Society should accept that…

...Has/ have become a popular alternative

These days

As a result, …

Some have suggested that…

The advantages of…. outweigh (not ‘outweight’ – ‘weigh’ is the verb, and ‘weight’ is the noun – after all, ‘outweight’ does not exist) the disadvantages

One of the (main) reasons why…is that…

Although….

This might prevent…from (+ing)

The benefits of…

It is certainly true (nottruth’- ‘truth’ is the noun and ‘true’ the adjective e.g., a true story) that…

This may have a negative effect/ impact on….

However, I do not agree that…

is always the fault of….

I agree with the statement… (e.g., in the task)

I think that…

It is true that …, even though (2 words; noteventhough’) …

After all, (2 words; notafterall’) …

The problem can/ cannot (do not write can’t as we do not use abbreviations in our essay) be solved by (e.g., giving) ….

Some people argue that… (e.g., the government should…)

However, I feel that…

…and, therefore, …

As a result of the widespread practice of…

As a result, …

...has proved the most effective way of reducing…

…but nowadays…

Nobody would suggest that we should reverse this practice

Many people decide on…early in their lives (not ‘in their life’)

This, they argue, leads to…

Having said that, there are some people who…

Clearly,(you may also use it in the conclusion)

In the final analysis…. (conclusion)

To conclude…. (conclusion)

Ultimately,(conclusion)

In the end,…(conclusion)

It is generally believed that…

In my country, most people have to…

I would argue/say/claim that…

It could be argued that…

It seems to me that…

I tend to think/ believe that…

I feel that…

As far as I am concerned…

It is understood that…

It is generally accepted that…

There is a tendency to believe that…

One of the main arguments in favor of/ against… is…

Although … the …. has to be considered first

Despite the fact that…

Even though (2 words; not ‘eventhough’) …

Admittedly,

Certainly,

…. but/ However….

It may be true/ likely/ unlikely that…

…is beneficial for

It seems to me that…has many/few benefits/ drawbacks

While I agree that…

…this encourages…to …

…. (e.g., advertising) is targeted at/ focuses on (e.g., youth)

I am convinced/ unconvinced that

Some people find it hard to accept that…

It is doubtful whether...

I am uncertain whether…

I disagree with the view/ opinion/ argument that…

It is unjustifiable to say that…

There is little/ solid/ growing/ mounting/ increasing/ compelling (compelling = strong) evidence to support the view that…

... is encouraging people to

...is discouraging people from +ing

enjoy + ing (e.g., I enjoy meeting people)

I would argue that….

To be more precise, …

Here, I am/ am not referring to…

In other words, …

That is/ is not to say…

In fact, …

It is often said that…

They have a positive influence on

…and by this, I mean that…

This is essential in areas such as…

While I admit that…, I am convinced that…

These problems can be largely avoided if the approach to…is handled well by…

…and so, naturally they… to handle the…

…particularly at…

Understandably, governments look for ways to reduce (e.g., pollution) …, and one way is…or, alternatively, to…

A good example of this is…, which has successfully reduced the (e.g., pollution)

…is planning to…

…to encourage people to use it… (e.g., public transportation)

…to discourage people from using…

In my experience, this is a sensible way to tackle/ handle the...// deal with the/ this issue/ problem

Of course (2 words, notofcourse’) …

For one thing…

Indeed…

If this is the case, ... 

If that were the case (it is not established that it is the case)

Naturally, …

Understandably…

In my experience, …

It is possible, for example, that….

…will be a realistic option now/ in the future

It would completely transform our (e.g., traditional) view of…

It is impossible to predict what type of…

Statistics/ studies show/// research shows/demonstrates that…

For one thing/ Firstly, they are…, and secondly, they…

Generally speaking, …

This reduction has been the result of…

These figures increase/ decrease further when you include…

Such/ these attitudes may be changing

The majority says/ said they preferred ….

However, these/ such qualities are not highly rated by the….

This rise/ drop is due to a combination of things, such as…

Unfortunately, it looks unlikely that this trend will be reversed.

Exponents (exponent = a person who believes in and promotes the truth or benefits of an idea or theory) claim that…, while opponents argue that…

There is always controversy (pronounced ˈkɒn.trə.vɜː.si or kənˈtrɒv.ə.si) over whether it is important to… (e.g., spend large sums of money on gadgets) or whether…should be…

Without it, we would have no…

Nevertheless/ Nonetheless,

In this field is arguable that…

…throughout the world

Surely it would be more productive and less costly if…

Others say that…

I agree with the statement (in the task)

Many societies already have systems to help…

I think the problem can/ cannot be solved by….

I think it may be their own fault….

The problem has many different root causes.

People have to take some responsibility for their own welfare (= the health, happiness, and fortunes of a person or group) 

People/ The government may be to blame for it

People can be responsible for themselves

Society’s welfare system could be better run by…

There are fewer risks (we use 'fewer,' not 'less,' as risk is a countable noun) of...

There is a risk of…

The question of whether we should…

Researchers and governments are primarily interested in...

Trends in...

Norms (norm = something that is usual, typical, or standard)

…fail to take into consideration the individuals/ society

Little information is released about the harmful/ deleterious/ detrimental/ damaging effects/ ramifications (= complex or unwanted consequences of an action or event) of…on/in…

In the event that…

In addition, there is the issue of…

The rights of the individual should be taken into consideration

As members of society, we should be obliged to….

…is a potentially harmful practice

Some people may also be against it/this

Their needs should be considered when any decisions are made.

For these reasons, I feel strongly

           I strongly/ firmly suggest that….

It should be/ not be obligatory

The individual should have the right to choose whether or not to(e.g., participate in…)

It is this dedication that enables them to achieve their goals

….is related to things like…

Of course, you must also….

So, there are many things to consider when we chose….

Clearly, the…

We develop a more mature understanding of ourselves

In terms of….

It seems that people prefer to have…

It is generally accepted that….

Many people feel that

Admittedly, it may be true that

The problem caused by

So, the problem continues

Although one answer is to… this will only result in

The internet is a useful resource for students

It is doubtful (pronounced ˈdaʊt.f(ə)l) whether…

…as a result

As a result,

Some people find it hard to accept that…

That is to say….

To be more precise, I think that…

…should be able to decide for themselves what they….

In fact,

I would argue that….

By this, I mean….

While I admit that….

It is probably true to say that…

Something should be done about it

However, I am not sure that…is the answer

Most people prefer to…

Clearly, it is much better to be able to….

…should work hard and… (e.g., behave well)

That is not to say that they should not….

…but overall, their attitude to…. should be a serious one

They are, to a certain extent

…being quite selfish

Also, I am not convinced that…

….is helpful to them

Studies have shown/ demonstrated that

I tend to think that it is the…’s responsibility to…

I do not mean by this that they should…

…but I do think that...should be…

…should be trained to deal with…

In addition, / Additionally, they should…

While I accept that…., I feel that…

(e.g., The government) should establish rules and ensure that everyone follows them

More of this money/ more funds should be directed towards ('toward' in North American English) ….

Without it, we would have no….

…and this has financial disadvantages

It is an arguable case for discussion. / Arguably, ... 

…used to be so expensive/ costly that only the wealthy owned them

Although some people believe humans are responsible for…, others think it is caused by…

From/to my perspective, I believe that…

To put this into perspective (= compare something to other things so that it can be accurately and fairly judged (^^)), I believe that…

I incline to the exponents (= those who believe in the benefits of an idea) / opponents view as I think that….




Other vs. the other vs. others vs. another


When ‘other’ is a determiner, it does not have a plural form e.g., ‘These boxes are for toys. The other boxes are for magazines’ (not: The others boxes).

When ‘other’ as a pronoun refers to more than one person or thing, it takes the plural form ‘others,’ e.g., ‘Some think that a fat tax will reduce the number of people with heart disease; others disagree’ (not: other disagree).

‘Other’ must have a determiner before it when it comes in front of a singular countable noun. If the noun is indefinite (e.g. a book, a woman, an idea), we use ‘another’, e.g., ‘I’ve posted the first envelope. What shall I do with that other envelope?’ (not: What shall I do with other envelope?) /// e.g., ‘After a year in the UK, I was ready to move to another European country because of the Brexit’ (not: to move to other European country).

We write ‘another’ as one word e.g., ‘There is another café a little further down the same street’ (not: There is an other café)

‘Another’ is singular. We do not use it with plural nouns e.g., ‘Other interesting places to visit in Sydney include the Opera House and the city harbor’ (not: Another interesting place to visit)


Reference (Retrieved: February 7, 2018):

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/other-others-the-other-or-another

http://www.grammar.cl/english/another-other-others.htm

http://www.englishcurrent.com/grammar/other-another-difference/

https://www.eslbuzz.com/english-grammar-another-vs-other-vs-others-vs-the-other/



           Useful Vocabulary

 

The way people communicate

Material possessions/ Consumerism

Moral values

Internet-based courses/ distant learning/ university-based courses/ e-learning

To adjust the law (not ‘the laws’) accordingly

Children mature at a younger age

The interference of parents or teachers (notthe parents/teachers’ as we are generally speaking)

…to make decisions about their lives (not ‘their life’)

Children are too young to be shouldering (as a verb) such heavy (not ‘such a heavy’) responsibilities

Regular driving tests throughout their lives// Driving standards

Certain groups of people could/ would benefit

(It is) Useful in the case of…

May prevent them from

Many societies already have systems to help … (e.g., the poor/ homeless)

State benefits

People have/ need to take some responsibility for their own welfare but, at the same time, some people cannot (do not write ‘can’t’ – no abbreviations are allowed in the essay) ... 

They struggle to survive each day/ It is hard for them to survive

…and, therefore, laws should be made forcing…to…

Medical practices

…is/are part of human progress

…but nowadays, sanitation (= conditions relating to public health, especially the provision of clean drinking water and adequate sewage disposal) is better

Career path

Satisfying working life

Their jobs are/ are not enjoyable

They are affected by their experiences

…can have a big/ significant impact on our goals and ambitions

A public place/ in public

Packaging in supermarkets

Shoppers

Educational programs

Although some people would like to have a lot of…. the cost of…. has to be considered first

Uncensored material (e.g., on the internet)

Urban center

Taking exercise

Leisure activity/ activities

Spend our free time/ My most popular pastime/ hobby

Job commitment

…is the key to success/ to succeed in

(e.g., students) are motivated by… and this motivation can only benefit them

Disruptive school students are/ should be grouped and taught (‘teach’ is an irregular verb) together/ separately

…has/ have positive/ negative influence

Otherwise, how can we… (e.g., get around?)

Traffic jam/ congestion

Road rules/ road safety

My hometown

A weekday

Commitment to their subject was/is more important

They often just do not bother

Recycling centers/ waste

Government taxes

Wealthy people

(e.g. The World Cup) is held in a different country… (e.g., every four years)

It generates huge amounts of money

More money should be directed towards treating patients

Medical research/ studies

International funding

Scientists are working independently

Current research being conducted on(e.g., the HIV virus)

Nowadays, young people are better qualified than (they were) in the past

Competition for jobs is greater than it used to be

The opportunities exist for them

Diseases have been eradicated

Money-saving schemes (pronounced skms)

On religious grounds

Job satisfaction

Naughty children

Physical punishment

School/ work codes of conduct

Obese (pronounced əʊˈbs) / people who are overweight/ people with obesity (pronounced əʊˈb.sə.ti)

Unhealthy diet

Global warming

           Fossil fuels 

           Recyclable materials 

Pollution levels

 

Brainstorming – Plan

 

You may write on a blank paper a list of the important features as they come into your mind and make a DRAFT, a plan of your answer

 

[You write the notes briefly (using key phrases), not in full sentences as in the examples below]

 

Example: a list of advantages and disadvantages of repeating driving tests 

 

          Advantages:

Reduction of accidents

Useful for older drivers (age + driving years)

Useful for those who do not drive regularly

Keeps drivers updated with road rules

Prevents especially the younger drivers from driving fast and aggressively (My comment: being ‘fast and furious’!)

Raises driving standards

 

           Disadvantages:

The extra cost needed for repeating driving tests

They need to be organized – (this is) not so easy

A written test is needed – not so easy to include it every time

A longer waiting period for learning drivers

 

Distinguishing the main from the supporting ideas

 

1st Example:  

 

Topic: advantages and disadvantages of repeating driving tests

 

Position: repeating driving tests has many benefits (here, the writer agrees with the view)

 

1st Main ideabeneficial to certain groups of drivers

          Supporting ideas: 

Useful for older drivers (in age and driving time)

Useful for drivers who do not drive regularly

It may prevent especially the younger drivers from driving fast and aggressively

 

2nd Main idea: makes driving safer

Supporting ideas:

Accident reduction 

Keeps drivers updated with road rules

Raises driving standards



2nd Example

 

Topic: Children over 15 should be allowed to independently make decisions about their lives. Society should accept that children mature at a younger age and adjust the law accordingly

 

Position: children should not have the right to make their own decisions until adulthood (here, the writer disagrees with the view)

 

Main ideachildren need to be protected under the nest of their family and teachers

 

          Supporting ideas:

It is not appropriate at this age to let them decide independently

Family and teachers should be responsible

Children may lose education and family care



3rd Example:

 

Topic: Should parents be obliged by law to immunize their children against common diseases, or should they have the right to choose not to immunize their children?  

 

Position: immunization should be compulsory for children regardless of their parents’ opinion against them 

 

1st Main ideaprevention is better than treatment. [Hippocrates (460 – c. 370 BC), ancient Greek doctor, father of medicine]

 

           Supporting ideas:

Vaccines have reduced (diseases such as) polio (= poliomyelitis), rubella, etc.

They have also eradicated diseases such as smallpox. Lives are saved.

 

          2nd Main ideaimmunization is part of human progress 

 

          Supporting ideas:

Better conditions of hygiene ((pronounced ˈhaɪ.dʒiːn) = conditions or practices conducive to maintaining health and preventing disease, especially through cleanliness)

If we omit vaccines, it is as if we go backward (or 'backwards' in North American English)

We should aim for (here, do not use 'aim at' or 'aim to') a better immunization program

 

           Reference

1) Jakeman V., McDowell C., New Insights into IELTS, Workbook with Answers, Cambridge English, Cambridge University Press, 1st published 2008, reprinted 2016

2)  Jakeman V., McDowell C., New Insights into IELTS, Student’s Book with Answers, Cambridge English, Cambridge University Press, 3rd edition, 2008, 17th printing, 2015

3)  Jakeman V., McDowell C., New Insights into IELTS, Student’s Book with Answers, Cambridge English, Cambridge University Press, 2016.

 

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